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Dark Side by Firestorm-the-Poet Dark Side by Firestorm-the-Poet

The first in my Pink Floyd's Crown of Sonnets. :) I really like how it came out, both lyrically and visually.
Just let me know if you think the poem is too hard to read in the rainbow form I have it in. I hope it isn't, cause I really like the way it looks. :XD:
Inspired by Pink Floyd's album Dark Side Of The Moon. :D

How I Wish You Were Here sonnet: [link]



Don't know what a crown of sonnets is? Here's an explanation. [link]



Dark Side Sonnet (c) to me
Triangle Brush (c) to :icongekkoudoragon:
Pulse Line Brush (c) to :iconpindlekill:

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jazewel Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Student General Artist
I love this piece, so creative, at first I thought it was just going to be the lyrics from one of the songs, but I was pleasantly surprised to see this awesome poem.
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WolfofEnder Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I like everything
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Firestorm-the-Poet Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks very much. :D
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:iconwolfofender:
WolfofEnder Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
No problem
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ToxicFlare2112 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Perfect verse! Much love :)
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Firestorm-the-Poet Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I'm glad you like it. :D
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returnofthefetus Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
floyd, nice. Was gonna get one of their shirts the other day. 
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Firestorm-the-Poet Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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demonrobber Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
I am a massive Pink Flod fan. I saw Roger Waters play Dark Side of the Moon in Hyde Park. This is well presented and I can feel the influence of the music. Melodic insanity indeed. Perfect.
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Firestorm-the-Poet Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for the feedback on my poem. I really appreciate it. I am sorry it has taken so long to respond, I haven't been on DA in over a year.
I missed Waters on The Dark Side if the Moon tour, but I got to see him on The Wall tour and it was awesome!
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Rekka-chan Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Student General Artist
Loved it! It's so awesome :D
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:iconfirestorm-the-poet:
Firestorm-the-Poet Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! Glad you liked it! :D
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Rekka-chan Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011  Student General Artist
No problem! Keep it up ^^
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Marina41 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
loving this, no its not too hard to read...fantastic work :) smiles
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:iconfirestorm-the-poet:
Firestorm-the-Poet Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks very much, glad you like it. :glomp:
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Smooothe Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
cool
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:iconfirestorm-the-poet:
Firestorm-the-Poet Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks very much! :D
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Rainbow-squirt001 Featured By Owner May 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Different font perhaps? I find it a bit hard to read. *looks at the comments* Damn someone already mentioned it. lol

Very cool concept though! I want moar.
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Firestorm-the-Poet Featured By Owner May 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Damn it! I didn't save it as a work in progress! That means to fix the font I'll have to do it all over again! :icondragoncryingplz:
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Firestorm-the-Poet Featured By Owner May 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I'm going to try that. I hope that does the trick, cause I really like the rainbow effect and would really like to keep it. But, if in the end it's hard to read either way I'll have to change it back to how I had originally. No point to posting a poem if no one can read it, right? :lol:

Thanks very much. I am doing them album by album, starting with Dark Side of the Moon. I just finished Wish You Were Here and posted it. Next one up, Animals. I love Animals :love: My favorite album by them.
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Rainbow-squirt001 Featured By Owner May 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
My first album was Wish You Were Here. What's so awesome is that Rasputina did a cover of the title track. It was amaaaaazing!
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Firestorm-the-Poet Featured By Owner May 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I didn't know they did a cover of Wish You Were Here, I'll have to go check it out. :nod:
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Rainbow-squirt001 Featured By Owner May 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I have it. In fact, I own all of their albums. lol
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Firestorm-the-Poet Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome! :horns:
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RiffRaffThunder Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
Really cool idea!
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Firestorm-the-Poet Featured By Owner May 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks very much! And for the fave too! :D
There will be six more Pink Floyd sonnets! :la:
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AutumnHoney Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
Neat concept, but it does get hard to read. Too thinned out I think. Might work better with a different font... maybe one that isn't all caps?
And maybe have a larger black border around it so that the text isn't touching the edge of the image.
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Firestorm-the-Poet Featured By Owner May 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
*I will fiddle*
I hate when I forget words when I type. :ohmygod:
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AutumnHoney Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
lol can't wait to see it ^-^
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Firestorm-the-Poet Featured By Owner May 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :D
I fiddle around with it in Photoshop some more, with the font and try to make the background a little bigger. Thanks very much for the suggestions. :nod:
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